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  1. Posted: July 16, 2017In: Examples

    After an attempt on his father’s life, a by-the-book Marine captain must kill his father’s rivals and become head of his own crime family to protect those he loves.

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    Added an answer on April 5, 2018 at 3:02 pm

    is this supposed to be the Godfather? ?My God this misses the mark. ?Where's the sense of grandeur? Where is the Shakespearean struggle between father and son, and light and darkness that plagues Micheal as he weighs ?avenging his father, falling prey to his demons, or to be a "good" man?

    is this supposed to be the Godfather? ?My God this misses the mark. ?Where’s the sense of grandeur? Where is the Shakespearean struggle between father and son, and light and darkness that plagues Micheal as he weighs ?avenging his father, falling prey to his demons, or to be a “good” man?

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  2. Posted: April 5, 2018In: Examples

    The true story of how a motley crew pulled off England’s biggest bank heist only to discover they were set up by MI5 to retrieve scandalous photos of a royal person.

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    Added an answer on April 5, 2018 at 12:05 pm

    Martine offers Terry a lead on a foolproof bank hit on London's Baker Street. She targets a roomful of safe deposit boxes worth millions in cash and jewelry. But Terry and his crew don't realize the boxes also contain a treasure trove of dirty secrets - secrets that will thrust them into a deadly weRead more

    Martine offers Terry a lead on a foolproof bank hit on London’s Baker Street. She targets a roomful of safe deposit boxes worth millions in cash and jewelry. But Terry and his crew don’t realize the boxes also contain a treasure trove of dirty secrets – secrets that will thrust them into a deadly web of corruption and illicit scandal.

    So that’s the imdb concept for the bank Job, but I think the one you are coming up with is better.

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  3. Posted: March 23, 2018In: SciFi

    Revised: When a bumbling alien pollutes the timeline, he and his adopted human family must travel back in history, and prevent the apocalypse? again!

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    Added an answer on April 5, 2018 at 12:01 pm

    I think this is getting close. ?I think you can cut "well-intentioned" because his adopted human family means he's got to be fairly friendly. ?bumbling is enough. So this is sci-fi comedy I take it? ?Not sure pollute is the right word, but close. When a bumbling ?alien pollutes our timeline, he andRead more

    I think this is getting close. ?I think you can cut “well-intentioned” because his adopted human family means he’s got to be fairly friendly. ?bumbling is enough. So this is sci-fi comedy I take it? ?Not sure pollute is the right word, but close.

    When a bumbling ?alien pollutes our timeline, he and his adopted human family must travel back in history to prevent the apocalypse? again!

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