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An alien living as their friendly neighbourhood mechanic, must prevent his beloved street from getting sold block-by-block before the greedy billionaire visits his garage
egghead is a nice title. Would indicate a comedy a bit more to me. ?"their" friendly throws me -- who is "their" referring to? ? I'd stick to "the friendly." Block-by-block is also overkill for me. ?Can you come up with a better more nefarious description than billionaire? ?Greedy developer? ?friendRead more
egghead is a nice title. Would indicate a comedy a bit more to me. ?”their” friendly throws me — who is “their” referring to? ? I’d stick to “the friendly.”
Block-by-block is also overkill for me. ?Can you come up with a better more nefarious description than billionaire? ?Greedy developer? ?friendly and beloved ?serve the same purpose for me in regards to his affection for his neighbors.
Idea:
A shapeshifting alien, living as the friendly neighborhood mechanic, must prevent his block from getting sold before the greedy developer discovers eggs hibernating in his garage. ?
See lessThe true story of how a motley crew pulled off England’s biggest bank heist only to discover they were set up by MI5 to retrieve scandalous photos of a royal person.
I really like this concept and logline. ?Sounds fun and layered. ?I think you definitely need the hero in it. ?Here is what I would go with: The true story of a?used car dealer who led a motley crew to pull off England?s biggest bank heist, only to discover he was set up by M5 to retrieve scandalousRead more
I really like this concept and logline. ?Sounds fun and layered. ?I think you definitely need the hero in it. ?Here is what I would go with:
The true story of a?used car dealer who led a motley crew to pull off England?s biggest bank heist, only to discover he was set up by M5 to retrieve scandalous photos of a royal.
Keep him the lead.
I don’t think you need to specify Margaret. ?I cut shady because I think you need to find a better adjective for your “hero.” ?Something more sympathetic, with a wink, even if he is slippery and unscrupulous.
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