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When a stripper learns the exact date of her death from a mysterious patron, she seeks to tie up the loose ends and find meaning in her life.
I agree with debbiemoon. The term "loose ends" is too broad. Maybe the stripper has a "come to Jesus" moment," and wants to get out of the business. Maybe she wants to help others who have followed her path with the time she has left. And maybe, just maybe the ticking clock of her impending demise hRead more
I agree with debbiemoon. The term “loose ends” is too broad. Maybe the stripper has a “come to Jesus” moment,” and wants to get out of the business. Maybe she wants to help others who have followed her path with the time she has left. And maybe, just maybe the ticking clock of her impending demise happens to stop when she truly helped other, which in-turn ends up saving herself. Good luck.
See lessFour over-educated slacker's from Seattle lose at life and love, until Oscar meets the woman of his dreams.
I'm not sure you need to reference "Four slackers." You might consider writing it this way. "Oscar, an over-educated Seattle slacker, continues to loose at life and love until he meets the woman of his dreams."
I’m not sure you need to reference “Four slackers.” You might consider writing it this way.
See less“Oscar, an over-educated Seattle slacker, continues to loose at life and love until he meets the woman of his dreams.”