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When a basketball star learns of his own childhood abduction, his guilty mother becomes an insidious rival, jeopardizing his shot at championship glory.
Great points, Debbie and Geno. The word "rival" is a bit confusing. When I looked up the definition used as a noun in the dictionary, it says "a person who is competing for the same object or goal as another, or who tries to equal or outdo another; competitor." If you look at a thesaurus, other termRead more
Great points, Debbie and Geno. The word “rival” is a bit confusing. When I looked up the definition used as a noun in the dictionary, it says “a person who is competing for the same object or goal as another, or who tries to equal or outdo another; competitor.” If you look at a thesaurus, other terms for rival are “opponent,” “enemy,” “adversary,” etc. Whew! Maybe others will have a different take?
See lessWhen a basketball star learns of his own childhood abduction, his guilty mother becomes an insidious rival, jeopardizing his shot at championship glory.
Since I came from a sports background, a "rival" to me was someone who was disliked, and posed the biggest threat to a great season or championship trophy. Of course, I don't want there to be any confusion on the part of the reader, so I will so what other descriptions I can come up with. Thank youRead more
Since I came from a sports background, a “rival” to me was someone who was disliked, and posed the biggest threat to a great season or championship trophy. Of course, I don’t want there to be any confusion on the part of the reader, so I will so what other descriptions I can come up with. Thank you for the suggestion.
See lessAn elite member of the galactic Special Forces is wrongly convicted for a crime committed by a congressman?s son. He must prove his innocence, and seek his revenge, while he serves his sentence at an experimental prison camp.
Like Debbiemoon, I would also agree about more of a present day scenario, especially if a production budget comes in to play. I would also write your logline as follows. "When an elite member of a Special Forces unit is wrongly convicted for a crime committed by a congressman's son, he must prove hiRead more
Like Debbiemoon, I would also agree about more of a present day scenario, especially if a production budget comes in to play. I would also write your logline as follows.
“When an elite member of a Special Forces unit is wrongly convicted for a crime committed by a congressman’s son, he must prove his innocence, while strategizing an unlikely escape from a secret government prison.
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