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Abducted as a small child, a college hoop star must endure a season of unexpected obstacles when he sets out to find his long-lost dad.
Great feedback from everyone. Without posting another version, here is another attempt. Logline attempt #1: Disbelieving his depraved mother that he is illegitimate, a godly college hoop star follows his faith to discover a dark family secret surrounding the truth about his long-lost dad.
Great feedback from everyone. Without posting another version, here is another attempt.
Logline attempt #1: Disbelieving his depraved mother that he is illegitimate, a godly college hoop star follows his faith to discover a dark family secret surrounding the truth about his long-lost dad.
See lessJeopardizing his shot at reaching the "Final Four," a devout star athlete, raised under an assumed identity, must outwit his vengeful, on the lam mother to find his missing dad.
His mother mother abducted him when he was two years old to avoid being apprehended by the law for a crime. In my screenplay, she always told her son that he was illegitimate, but as he got older he didn't believe her. Because he sets out to find his father, she seeks revenge, which translates intoRead more
His mother mother abducted him when he was two years old to avoid being apprehended by the law for a crime. In my screenplay, she always told her son that he was illegitimate, but as he got older he didn’t believe her. Because he sets out to find his father, she seeks revenge, which translates into him being removed from the team–thanks to his mother. Here is another version of my logline.
“After discovering he’s been raised under an assumed identity, a prized college recruit’s championship hopes are threatened by his felonious, on the lam mother when he sets out to find his missing dad.”
See lessWhen a basketball star learns of his own childhood abduction, his guilty mother becomes a vengeful rival, jeopardizing his shot at championship glory.
Here is the logline I re-wrote because of confusing elements, some of which you pointed out. The following version is one that several others seemed to agree on. When a basketball star learns of his own childhood abduction, his guilty mother becomes an insidious adversary, jeopardizing his shot at cRead more
Here is the logline I re-wrote because of confusing elements, some of which you pointed out. The following version is one that several others seemed to agree on.
When a basketball star learns of his own childhood abduction, his guilty mother becomes an insidious adversary, jeopardizing his shot at championship glory.
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