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  1. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    An overwhelmed single-father, hesitantly adopts the 10-year-old daughter of a former love who is about to die, only to learn the young girl is actually his.

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    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 7:19 pm

    Or you could make the story about a commitment phobic single man who agrees to adopt an ex-lovers child. Complications arise when the child turns out to be his. Story would be more a drama about his struggle to accept being a father.

    Or you could make the story about a commitment phobic single man who agrees to adopt an ex-lovers child. Complications arise when the child turns out to be his.

    Story would be more a drama about his struggle to accept being a father.

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  2. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    An overwhelmed single-father, hesitantly adopts the 10-year-old daughter of a former love who is about to die, only to learn the young girl is actually his.

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    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 7:16 pm

    As far I'm aware you tell acts 1 & 2 of the story. You wouldn't see the logline for Sixth Sense explaining he's already dead.

    As far I’m aware you tell acts 1 & 2 of the story. You wouldn’t see the logline for Sixth Sense explaining he’s already dead.

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  3. Posted: December 21, 2012In: Public

    When a stripper learns the exact date of her death from a mysterious patron, she seeks to tie up the loose ends and find meaning in her life.

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    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 6:49 pm

    The most interesting part of this for me, is how she finds out the exact date of her death. The ability to do this sounds much more interesting than her tying up loose ends. So either you need to make it more believable in how she knows she's going to die or play more on this aspect and make it moreRead more

    The most interesting part of this for me, is how she finds out the exact date of her death. The ability to do this sounds much more interesting than her tying up loose ends. So either you need to make it more believable in how she knows she’s going to die or play more on this aspect and make it more of the story.

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