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  1. Posted: May 7, 2012In: Public

    A woman with a troubled past is contacted repeatedly by a serial killer who seems to know her deepest secrets.

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 5:56 pm

    Interesting logline. I echo some of the other comments. If I were to go watch the film, I'd like to know more about her troubled past, it's too vague and the relevancy in this story. Also a clue as to the nature of the 'darkest secrets' would add more interesting detail to the logline. We could alsoRead more

    Interesting logline.
    I echo some of the other comments. If I were to go watch the film, I’d like to know more about her troubled past, it’s too vague and the relevancy in this story. Also a clue as to the nature of the ‘darkest secrets’ would add more interesting detail to the logline.
    We could also know more about the nature of the battle between these two characters. It feels too generic at the moment with no unique selling point.

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  2. Posted: May 28, 2012In: Public

    Automated Companion

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 5:47 pm

    Oops! Yes mixed up the boxes. Driving force is for him to find his wife. Part of that is to overcome his agoraphobia which is why he needs to build the tunnel, to take him that further step to joining society. The automated companion is the catalyst that helps him open up to the world and the truthRead more

    Oops! Yes mixed up the boxes.
    Driving force is for him to find his wife. Part of that is to overcome his agoraphobia which is why he needs to build the tunnel, to take him that further step to joining society.
    The automated companion is the catalyst that helps him open up to the world and the truth about the disappearance of his wife.

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