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Ridiculed by his friends after a meltdown a bipolar drug dealer finds his inner genius and develops a product that becomes a Walmart bestseller.
Interesting logline. The phrase 'finds his inner genius' is the key to this story and we need to know how and why to make us interested in seeing this film. Why does he have an inner genius? It feels like a comedy but you need to clarify this more in the logline.
Interesting logline. The phrase ‘finds his inner genius’ is the key to this story and we need to know how and why to make us interested in seeing this film. Why does he have an inner genius? It feels like a comedy but you need to clarify this more in the logline.
See lessEd Noble?s world falls apart when a suicide bomber murders his family. Holding the bomber?s spiritual leader responsible, Ed resorts to desperate measures to bring him to account.
Not a particular favourite this genre but you have the basics of a good logline. I'd like to see more about Ed Noble's world to make it more interesting. Maybe some unique concept to make him a great antagonist. From a sympathy point of view it is a balancing act to get the audience to root for someRead more
Not a particular favourite this genre but you have the basics of a good logline. I’d like to see more about Ed Noble’s world to make it more interesting. Maybe some unique concept to make him a great antagonist.
See lessFrom a sympathy point of view it is a balancing act to get the audience to root for someone just out for revenge, unless he is also clearly saving people from further hardship.
Automated Companion
The relationship with the automated companion is what brings Doug to final get to the truth. It is the catalyst needed where previously he had been held back by his mental frailties.
The relationship with the automated companion is what brings Doug to final get to the truth. It is the catalyst needed where previously he had been held back by his mental frailties.
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