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  1. Posted: May 4, 2012In: Public

    When a highly driven female FBI agent arrests a charismatic con man with near psychic perception, he offers to help her catch a notorious and most wanted serial killer, before he can strike again.

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 6:12 pm

    Comments so far have been on the harsh side. I like the logline and feels it tells me everything I need to know about the film . Silence of the Lambs sprang to mind when I read it but it has enough of a difference to be interesting. I suppose there could be more of a conflict between the FBI agent aRead more

    Comments so far have been on the harsh side. I like the logline and feels it tells me everything I need to know about the film . Silence of the Lambs sprang to mind when I read it but it has enough of a difference to be interesting.
    I suppose there could be more of a conflict between the FBI agent and the psychic conman, or suggestion about how the relationship is difficult.
    Or you could make the serial killer more relevant to the skills of the conman, so he becomes the perfect assist in this crime.

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  2. Posted: May 6, 2012In: Public

    How far would YOU go in pursuit of pirates and the perfect fish?

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 6:03 pm

    Agree this is not a logline, more like a tagline for a poster. How far would I go....? Doesn't really matter, I'm not in the story and I've no desire to seek out the perfect fish, although I'm partial to the odd cod and chips. Whose story is it? What's there goal? Where do those damn fish come intoRead more

    Agree this is not a logline, more like a tagline for a poster.
    How far would I go….? Doesn’t really matter, I’m not in the story and I’ve no desire to seek out the perfect fish, although I’m partial to the odd cod and chips.
    Whose story is it? What’s there goal? Where do those damn fish come into it?

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  3. Posted: May 6, 2012In: Public

    An immortal warrior-princess from another universe unexpectedly falls in love with a human boy while hunting the shapechanger that murdered her parents.

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 6:00 pm

    When I first read this logline I thought it was going to be a comedy/fantasy. My problem is I'm still not sure what type of film it is. Also I can't pinpoint the conflict here. So what if she unexpectedly falls in love? How does it relate to her quest. There are good elements to the logline but it iRead more

    When I first read this logline I thought it was going to be a comedy/fantasy. My problem is I’m still not sure what type of film it is. Also I can’t pinpoint the conflict here. So what if she unexpectedly falls in love? How does it relate to her quest.
    There are good elements to the logline but it is not highlighting a clear story.

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