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So his injured penis can heal an alpha-male is put on libido removing medication, disrupting his win at all costs mentality and threatening his chances of becoming street luge champion.
The street luge champion hits you like a brick at the end of the logline. It is a crucial part of information to do with the goal of the character. But the logline suggests it will about his world once he has given up on the luge championship because of the injury. Use of the word alpha male makes mRead more
The street luge champion hits you like a brick at the end of the logline. It is a crucial part of information to do with the goal of the character. But the logline suggests it will about his world once he has given up on the luge championship because of the injury.
See lessUse of the word alpha male makes me think of him as a prize A chimp, but they maybe by personal taste at the use of that word.
Egotistical 90's band manager Steve Gold attempts to reform the modestly successfull boyband Xcite.
I like parts of the logline. I'm a little disappointed it's not a member of the band that's on the comeback trail. 'Band Manager' has less of an appeal than musician. Hard to feel empathy for his journey to if he already runs a nightclub. If Steve craves fame, running a band is not the best answer tRead more
I like parts of the logline. I’m a little disappointed it’s not a member of the band that’s on the comeback trail. ‘Band Manager’ has less of an appeal than musician. Hard to feel empathy for his journey to if he already runs a nightclub. If Steve craves fame, running a band is not the best answer to his desire, he needs to be out front in the band. I agree with others when they say we need a reason it is not going to work. And ‘moderately’ successful is not the best set up for maximum conflict. Maybe they left the scene under a cloud and he wants to put things straight.
See lessA heard about film recently made about a man who declared on his death bed that his old band unite. This is a great concept. I’m not sure yours has that level to peak interest.
Moles. Eat Worms.
Way out there... with no connection to the audience. If you want to create a film people would like to watch, you need to give them a good reason to watch. If it's for your viewing only.... you don't need a logline.
Way out there… with no connection to the audience.
If you want to create a film people would like to watch, you need to give them a good reason to watch.
If it’s for your viewing only…. you don’t need a logline.
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