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In the 1960?s, when her Greek village is devastated by drought, a teenage girl?s parents force her to migrate to Sydney Australia to marry a stranger and bring them prosperity but finds both racism and friendship, opportunities and mistreatment.
Is her main goal really to send $$ home to the parents who forced her into marriage? How about new better goal - escaping that marriage and starting life for herself. Ripping on dpg?s rewrite- ?After their Greek Village is devasted by drought, a young woman must marry a stranger in a strange land. SRead more
Is her main goal really to send $$ home to the parents who forced her into marriage? How about new better goal – escaping that marriage and starting life for herself.
Ripping on dpg?s rewrite-
See less?After their Greek Village is devasted by drought, a young woman must marry a stranger in a strange land. She struggles to escape the brutal marriage and make a life of her own in 1960s Australia.?
An angel from heaven comes down on earth to be with a depressed young man until the time that finally meets his soulmate in fulfillment of his deceased mother?s prayer.
Ripping off comments above, how about this angle - ?A trouble-making angel must help a hapless young man find his soulmate before she can get x.? I?m assuming the angel is protagonist. I recall there is a Damon/Affleck movie about bad angels though. I can?t remember the story, but consider looking iRead more
Ripping off comments above, how about this angle –
?A trouble-making angel must help a hapless young man find his soulmate before she can get x.?
I?m assuming the angel is protagonist.
I recall there is a Damon/Affleck movie about bad angels though. I can?t remember the story, but consider looking it up if you don?t know it.
See lessWhen an idealistic attorney discovers the man she freed from prison is a cold-blooded killer she chooses payback over ethics and mounts a stunning plan to put him back inside.
Rewrite: ?When an idealistic attorney discovers the man she freed from prison - and later married - is a sociopathic killer, she sets him up for a murder he hasn?t yet committed.? Thinking of adding the married part back in for further motivation, tension, and a reason why the characters are even arRead more
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?When an idealistic attorney discovers the man she freed from prison – and later married – is a sociopathic killer, she sets him up for a murder he hasn?t yet committed.?
Thinking of adding the married part back in for further motivation, tension, and a reason why the characters are even around each other. Because normally a lawyer wouldn?t even be around an ex-client, and this way I can turn him into a violent abuser.
Thinking I?ll have her hide another victim that he?s beaten into an inch of her life, but my lawyer won?t succeed in that plan. She?ll eventually succeed in setting him up for her OWN murder and get away with his $$ and maybe a child. The child would provide that extra motivation to get the hell out and put him behind bars.
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