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Series logline: In 1961, a British double agent, retired and living under a new alias on the French Riviera, must thwart a corrupt government agent secretly leaking information to an underground organisation of Nazis, men he sabotaged many years ago.
I?m very intrigued by this premise. Love the genre myself. But still a bit confused. Is he basically being made to do the right thing (catch a Nazi)? The dark past stuff is great for a broken type hero but shouldn?t he have a good guy goal? Here?s a thought melding your two long lines (don?t know ifRead more
I?m very intrigued by this premise. Love the genre myself. But still a bit confused. Is he basically being made to do the right thing (catch a Nazi)? The dark past stuff is great for a broken type hero but shouldn?t he have a good guy goal?
Here?s a thought melding your two long lines (don?t know if it matches your script):
?A retired spy living the highlife on the French Riveria, must return to his old dangerous games to catch a Nazi war criminal. ?(23 words)
And you can still add a couple words about what pulls him back in (inciting incident), by starting logline with ?After blah blah blah, a retired spy ….?
See lessA haunted young man must decide whether he?s mentally ill or really seeing ghosts when his recently deceased best friend asks for help solving his murder.
This is an intriguing premise and a movie I?d watch. On the Logline, can you describe the man with another adjective? If he?s ?haunted? then don?t we know he is in fact seeing ghosts? And would his goal be to actually solve the murder? Does he figure out the question of seeing ghosts vs mental illneRead more
This is an intriguing premise and a movie I?d watch.
On the Logline, can you describe the man with another adjective? If he?s ?haunted? then don?t we know he is in fact seeing ghosts?
And would his goal be to actually solve the murder? Does he figure out the question of seeing ghosts vs mental illness pretty early on and then start solving the murder?
See lessA nonchalant young woman who can feel no romantic emotions asks a hopeless romantic guy to teach her how to fall in love for the first time.
And fwiw this reminds me of Taming of the Shrew, except she doesn?t ask for the guy?s help, he?s forced upon her by family. (Or modern take, 10 Things I Hate About You.)
And fwiw this reminds me of Taming of the Shrew, except she doesn?t ask for the guy?s help, he?s forced upon her by family. (Or modern take, 10 Things I Hate About You.)
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