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  1. Posted: May 5, 2019In: Romance

    A nonchalant young woman who can feel no romantic emotions asks a hopeless romantic guy to teach her how to fall in love for the first time.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on May 7, 2019 at 7:36 pm

    If this is still seed of idea, how about this take: ?When a woman finds the perfect man, she desperately seeks to cure an illness ? her affliction to love caught after her mother?s miserable marriages. So she enlists the help of a tutor, a guy that can?t help falling in love.? A bit wordy, but you gRead more

    If this is still seed of idea, how about this take:

    ?When a woman finds the perfect man, she desperately seeks to cure an illness ? her affliction to love caught after her mother?s miserable marriages. So she enlists the help of a tutor, a guy that can?t help falling in love.?

    A bit wordy, but you get the idea

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  2. Posted: May 7, 2019In: Drama

    In an Australian offshore detention centre, a Syrian army medic refugee and her daughter fight for a visa to Australia despite the corrupt authorities and building tensions between the refugees.

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    Added an answer on May 7, 2019 at 6:36 pm

    After reading dpg?s insightful comments, consider: First sentence - about bravely escaping civil war with her daughter Second sentence - now she must wage her own war against corrupt system by doing x

    After reading dpg?s insightful comments, consider:

    First sentence – about bravely escaping civil war with her daughter
    Second sentence – now she must wage her own war against corrupt system by doing x

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  3. Posted: May 7, 2019In: Adventure

    ?Despite a debilitating injury, a young motorcyclist is determined to fulfill her dream of riding across the US in a motorcycle rally, but she has to compete with her boyfriend who mentors her to bounce back from a serious crash “

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    Added an answer on May 7, 2019 at 6:24 pm

    Reading Logline above, I?d drop the whole bf part. She?s the protagonist and her injury is the obstacle. However, perhaps look at Loglines for movies like Million Dollar Baby as examples where the mentor-mentee roles are central to plot, if this is case in your script.

    Reading Logline above, I?d drop the whole bf part. She?s the protagonist and her injury is the obstacle. However, perhaps look at Loglines for movies like Million Dollar Baby as examples where the mentor-mentee roles are central to plot, if this is case in your script.

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