Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • About
  • Questions
  • Answers
  • Best Answers
  1. Posted: June 23, 2015In: Public

    When a university student returns native sacred objects to a rural town he awakens an old Celtic curse. He must confront the curse to save the town and himself.

    Clint Cure Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 25, 2015 at 11:01 pm

    What Hammer films are you thinking of? I should check them out.

    What Hammer films are you thinking of? I should check them out.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: June 23, 2015In: Public

    When a woman?s badly burnt body is discovered, an occult writer investigates a strange Christian sect. She must escape the cult and expose their evil.

    Clint Cure Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 25, 2015 at 9:52 am

    I haven't described her as a reporter. She is a writer who writes books on the occult. She would see the cult as primitive and naive but have to hide her cynicism to investigate them properly. I don't think the elements in my logline are tying together well. Maybe I need to suggest that the murder hRead more

    I haven’t described her as a reporter. She is a writer who writes books on the occult. She would see the cult as primitive and naive but have to hide her cynicism to investigate them properly. I don’t think the elements in my logline are tying together well. Maybe I need to suggest that the murder has been part of some sort of ritual. I want the story to imply that the cult may be performing old pagan rituals e.g. Burning a virgin and scattering her ashes in the fields to appease the gods, burying charms in bottles and cats under houses etc.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: June 23, 2015In: Public

    When a woman?s badly burnt body is discovered, an occult writer investigates a strange Christian sect. She must escape the cult and expose their evil.

    Clint Cure Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 24, 2015 at 4:30 pm

    Does every story needs a strong character arc? What is Ripley's character arc in Alien? What is the character arc for Sargent Howie in Wickerman (which is a similar tone to this story), Aren't James Bond and Indiana Jones the same guys at the end of the movie as at the start.

    Does every story needs a strong character arc? What is Ripley’s character arc in Alien? What is the character arc for Sargent Howie in Wickerman (which is a similar tone to this story), Aren’t James Bond and Indiana Jones the same guys at the end of the movie as at the start.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
1 … 3 4 5 6 7 … 18

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 7,997
  • Reviews 32,189
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,710

screenwriting courses

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.