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  1. Posted: December 17, 2012In: Public

    ?While attending the Presidential Inauguration, a photojournalist will have to fight for his life after snapping a photo that was never meant for his eyes.?

    CoreyLane
    Added an answer on December 18, 2012 at 2:05 pm

    Thanks! I'll play with it some more. It was a spur of the moment idea.

    Thanks! I’ll play with it some more. It was a spur of the moment idea.

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  2. Posted: August 3, 2012In: Public

    Two Missionaries traveling from door to door on their mission of good must now fight for their lives when they knock on the wrong door riddled with evil.

    CoreyLane
    Added an answer on August 3, 2012 at 9:40 pm

    Chris - Thanks for the advice. I actually had that exact logline but I was on the fence. I didn't wanna make it too wordy but I didn't wanna make it too thin either. It's not the door that's riddled with evil. I believe that's worded poorly. It's the evil that resides at the home. Maybe "Two missionRead more

    Chris – Thanks for the advice. I actually had that exact logline but I was on the fence. I didn’t wanna make it too wordy but I didn’t wanna make it too thin either.

    It’s not the door that’s riddled with evil. I believe that’s worded poorly. It’s the evil that resides at the home. Maybe “Two missionaries must fight for their lives when they knock on a door where pure evil resides.”

    The younger of the two missionaries is the one where the story rides on. He has lost his faith – hence the reason he is on a missionary trip.

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  3. Posted: July 30, 2012In: Public

    A poor-innocent young girl meets a photographer in a coincidence, he promised her some future career but later she finds nothing but her death.

    CoreyLane
    Added an answer on July 31, 2012 at 9:19 am

    So she dies? It's a nice concept but you shouldn't give away the end of your film in your logline. Maybe something like "After being promised the world, a young and nieve girl must fight for her life after meeting a photographer by coincidence." Just a thought.

    So she dies? It’s a nice concept but you shouldn’t give away the end of your film in your logline. Maybe something like “After being promised the world, a young and nieve girl must fight for her life after meeting a photographer by coincidence.” Just a thought.

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