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  1. Posted: July 24, 2012In: Public

    Fresh home from war, two brothers must defend their family when one brother?s past comes back to haunt them.

    CoreyLane
    Added an answer on July 26, 2012 at 9:32 pm

    That's what I was leaning toward. Two flawed characters. One more flawed then the other.

    That’s what I was leaning toward. Two flawed characters. One more flawed then the other.

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  2. Posted: July 24, 2012In: Public

    Fresh home from war, two brothers must defend their family when one brother?s past comes back to haunt them.

    CoreyLane
    Added an answer on July 25, 2012 at 9:41 pm

    Wouldn't it also be easy to relate to a character who has to clean up after his brother's mistakes all through their lives even after death? What if the careless/reckless brother has the revelation about the way he has been living his life only to realize it's too late and his brother still has to cRead more

    Wouldn’t it also be easy to relate to a character who has to clean up after his brother’s mistakes all through their lives even after death? What if the careless/reckless brother has the revelation about the way he has been living his life only to realize it’s too late and his brother still has to clean his mess up?

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  3. Posted: July 24, 2012In: Public

    Fresh home from war, two brothers must defend their family when one brother?s past comes back to haunt them.

    CoreyLane
    Added an answer on July 25, 2012 at 9:23 am

    Wouldn't that make the logline too long and wordy. Possiblly giving away too much?

    Wouldn’t that make the logline too long and wordy. Possiblly giving away too much?

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