1. Posted: August 21, 2019In:

    When one of the last historical music venues closes, in a diversely changing city, a young band must help bring the spirit of Go-Go music to the forefront.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I think you have buried the story a bit, and why must they? Hoping to save GoGo music and their livelihoods a young band must .... in a hope of bring back the musics popularity in an increasingly gentrified city.

    I think you have buried the story a bit, and why must they?

    Hoping to save GoGo music and their livelihoods a young band must …. in a hope of bring back the musics popularity in an increasingly gentrified city.

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2019In:

    In a dystopian right wing world. A terrorist group is planting boxes holding either cash or explosives, opening it makes you rich or dead. A poor man and his friend find one and try to figure out what to do.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I have the theme/question ?It is better to die on your feet than live on your knees? The man doesn?t believe this in the beginning. But after having the opportunity for wealth tease him. He begins to see his life for what it is comprise and suffering. Here is the logline: When a poor yet content manRead more

    I have the theme/question

    ?It is better to die on your feet than live on your knees?

    The man doesn?t believe this in the beginning. But after having the opportunity for wealth tease him. He begins to see his life for what it is comprise and suffering. Here is the logline:

    When a poor yet content man finds a box that may contain money or a bomb left by a terrorists, and after failed attempts to discover its contents he finally deciding it is better to die than live on your knees.

    Thanks for any feedback. For tone think ?Children of Men?.

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  3. Posted: June 14, 2019In:

    In a dystopian right wing world. A terrorist group is planting boxes holding either cash or explosives, opening it makes you rich or dead. A poor man and his friend find one and try to figure out what to do.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    That?s if getting rich was his ambition. That would indicate he had already made up his mind. I need a question. With a question I can explore various answers. Thanks you the suggestion.

    That?s if getting rich was his ambition. That would indicate he had already made up his mind. I need a question. With a question I can explore various answers.

    Thanks you the suggestion.

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