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  1. Posted: February 15, 2019In: Drama

    Okay Mike you have very invaluable suggestions. Here?s another editing. I removed the spiritual identity part, however, it will still be included in the movie itself because that was one area she was being manipulated by. Also the ?deacon? position is important because it?s about the deception of someone high in the church. While his behavior maybe generally unacceptable, it will be a shock in the eyes of the congregation coming from someone who is supposed to be spiritually matured. I can?t seem to get this around 25 words. Urg? A woman raised in an unscrupulous orphanage hopes of happiness were shattered shortly after marrying a highly respected deacon when he suddenly begins to unleash some familiar abuse upon her. She must now muster up the courage to free herself once and for all.

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    Added an answer on February 15, 2019 at 12:35 pm

    It feels like the story is her mustering up the courage.

    It feels like the story is her mustering up the courage.

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  2. Posted: November 22, 2018In: Comedy

    A psychiatrist on the verge of suicide is haunted by a ghost who shows him that the way to his own happiness is through the suffering of his clients.

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    Added an answer on November 23, 2018 at 9:55 am

    I think it needs a reversal. But then again, maybe not. A ghost shows a suicidal psychiatrist the happiness in making his patients suffer but..... Just a thought.

    I think it needs a reversal. But then again, maybe not.

    A ghost shows a suicidal psychiatrist the happiness in making his patients suffer but…..

    Just a thought.

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  3. Posted: August 5, 2018In: Comedy

    A man exploits his friends cocaine habit to finish a script by a deadline.

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    Added an answer on August 6, 2018 at 7:19 am

    This is more of a marketing line. Desparate to meet his deadline a writer is out of his depth trying get cocaine to feed his addicted more talented friend cocaine to write the screenplay. We need some action to understand the story.

    This is more of a marketing line.

    Desparate to meet his deadline a writer is out of his depth trying get cocaine to feed his addicted more talented friend cocaine to write the screenplay.

    We need some action to understand the story.

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