1. Posted: December 29, 2016In:

    Street level dealer wanting more from life plans to import her own product triggering kidnap, murder and a war she cannot survive.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Thanks guys The trick to get audiences to like bad people is to make a likeable person like them. Plus make the really good at what they, then people admire them (which is what they did in Breaking Bad). Lastly give them logic so doing bad things has a logical basis, people can empathise. "A nickelRead more

    Thanks guys

    The trick to get audiences to like bad people is to make a likeable person like them. Plus make the really good at what they, then people admire them (which is what they did in Breaking Bad). Lastly give them logic so doing bad things has a logical basis, people can empathise.

    “A nickel and dime drug dealer wants the big time and tries importing her own product resulting in her sisters kidnap, gang war and driving her to murder a rival”

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  2. Posted: December 17, 2016In:

    An esoteric detective is recruited to find a pregnant woman?s killer, and a struggling rock and roll band holds the key to the mystery.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    If you drop the recruiting section it gives you room for connective tissue. "Investigating a pregnant woman's murder a detective ....."

    If you drop the recruiting section it gives you room for connective tissue. “Investigating a pregnant woman’s murder a detective …..”

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  3. Posted: December 4, 2016In:

    When an Iraq War vet loses both his house and wife, he resolves to use his training to take out the CEO of a major NYC investment bank whom he blames for his losses and whose security detail is mostly composed of other vets.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    An Iraq War vet plans to kill the CEO of the bank he blames for his financial problems, but the CEO's security are all ex-vets as well. Is there a hero? Can you supply why we would be backing the murderer. How and why do we sympathise with him?

    An Iraq War vet plans to kill the CEO of the bank he blames for his financial problems, but the CEO’s security are all ex-vets as well.

    Is there a hero? Can you supply why we would be backing the murderer. How and why do we sympathise with him?

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