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A perfectionist Youtube star’s page views plummet when she falls for a hang loose gamer geek. Their PDA insecurities and her scheming manager threaten to ctrl+alt+delete their dreams to go public with their “In a relationship” status.
After a breakup with her boyfriend YouTube co-star she must decide between failing viewers and true love or a relationship with loveless good career choice put forward by her manager. Long winded, but I'll keep working on it.
After a breakup with her boyfriend YouTube co-star she must decide between failing viewers and true love or a relationship with loveless good career choice put forward by her manager.
Long winded, but I’ll keep working on it.
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Is there a reason (stakes) we can roll in rather than just falling views? A million dollar deal or something. It's probably in your story, but I can't see it in the logline. She had to make a single decision, go public or not. What makes this so hard.
Is there a reason (stakes) we can roll in rather than just falling views? A million dollar deal or something. It’s probably in your story, but I can’t see it in the logline.
She had to make a single decision, go public or not. What makes this so hard.
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Let me some this (the likeable character type issue) up. A logline can be described as the quickest way through a story. The heart of a story. I am a narrative story teller. I wish I had the chance craft of a poet. Poets can get an emotion across in just a few words. This is where my loglines fall oRead more
Let me some this (the likeable character type issue) up.
A logline can be described as the quickest way through a story. The heart of a story.
I am a narrative story teller. I wish I had the chance craft of a poet. Poets can get an emotion across in just a few words.
This is where my loglines fall over. Some people find a new word order for me, or even reverse the phrasing to make it infinitely better. Or they tell me I am vague. What I thought was clear was not. All super helpful.
I know the skill I have as a story teller. As you are aware I am more than happy to defend my story choices and maintain what makes me unique.
I am teflon to thing I think will not help me.
But not everyone is like me. Perhaps improving a logline on a story we see as stupid or pointless would be more helpful than commenting on the story. Think of it from a newbies POV. They come here for help and get told all the holes in there story.
Less than encouraging. Go back through my loglines, you’ll see that NIR normally dislikes my characters. That’s is because we are different writers, which is what the world needs.
I am still stuck a little on a way get to the idea of mayhem and chaos across in the back half of the logline.
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