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Any screenwriters out there want to help me
I am going to sound like the biggest jerk in the world but "idea are free". Ideas in themselves have no value. The value is in the execution of the idea. I am more than will to send you stuff to help you develop your skill as a writer. But most writers have 100 ideas a week. But having ideas and wanRead more
I am going to sound like the biggest jerk in the world but “idea are free”. Ideas in themselves have no value. The value is in the execution of the idea.
I am more than will to send you stuff to help you develop your skill as a writer. But most writers have 100 ideas a week.
But having ideas and wanting to write is the first step.
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When their worlds fall apart over the same week, three disenchanted, cash-strapped girlfriends make a pact to attempt three wild ways to make it big ? and get rich ? fast. I don't mind it. ?I see it as a comedy not a drama. ?I can see a crap load of comedy potential. ?The back half drifts off a bit.Read more
When their worlds fall apart over the same week, three disenchanted, cash-strapped girlfriends make a pact to attempt three wild ways to make it big ? and get rich ? fast.
I don’t mind it. ?I see it as a comedy not a drama. ?I can see a crap load of comedy potential. ?The back half drifts off a bit. “make it big ? and get rich ? fast” are all sort of the same thing from a logline point of view. ? Plus disenchanted and fallen apart world, don’t need both. ?Here is how I would tighten it.
When their worlds fall apart in the same week, three cash-strapped girlfriends make a pact to attempt three wild ways to get rich quick.
Would make me want to read the synopsis. ?Remember logline is the appetizer not the first course.
See lessA sixty-year-old man invests everything he has in order to find his ancestor?s treasure until he is drowning in debt, while his son cycles across the country to find him and take him back home.
"A sixty-year-old man invests everything he has in order to find his ancestor?s treasure until he is drowning in debt, while his son cycles across the country to find him and take him back home." Sent broke by his father's journey to find an ancestor's treasure a boy must cycle across the country toRead more
“A sixty-year-old man invests everything he has in order to find his ancestor?s treasure until he is drowning in debt, while his son cycles across the country to find him and take him back home.”
Sent broke by his father’s journey to find an ancestor’s treasure a boy must cycle across the country to retrieve his father.
I can’t see how the treasure hunt and the cycling will impact on each other. ?We need to be able to make that connection for them to both be in the logline. ?What triggers the cycling, this maybe a good ticking clock which drive the urgency of the cycling. ?Something like:
A boy cycles across the country to find his dad and stop him from sending them both broke chasing an ancestor’s treasure.
Can you drop us a few paragraphs on what the story is?
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