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  1. Posted: January 13, 2017In: Fantasy

    The last member of an ancient race must learn to once again trust humans. When a geeky teenage boy is the only chance to save everything she knows.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 15, 2017 at 1:29 pm

    I find the 'last chance to save everything she knows' a bit vague. Sometime vagueness is okay if you can tell what the movie is going to be. But I can't tell yet. Can we have some detail around that please.

    I find the ‘last chance to save everything she knows’ a bit vague. Sometime vagueness is okay if you can tell what the movie is going to be.

    But I can’t tell yet. Can we have some detail around that please.

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  2. Posted: January 14, 2017In: SciFi

    Astronaut’s Grave – Death row prisoners are given freedom by the state if they can come back alive from a space exploration.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 15, 2017 at 11:27 am

    Perhaps a few whys? Answered Why use death row inmates? Why is it so dangerous? Worry about the main character issue once you can article the conflict.

    Perhaps a few whys? Answered

    Why use death row inmates?
    Why is it so dangerous?

    Worry about the main character issue once you can article the conflict.

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  3. Posted: January 15, 2017In: Drama

    when a freedom believer incites his tribe to be free , he gets caught by another one to be bought as a slave .

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    Added an answer on January 15, 2017 at 11:23 am

    Concept a solid 9/10. But, who, when, where & why are missing. So tell us those things and we can help. The current version is too vague for any meaningful conversation.

    Concept a solid 9/10.

    But, who, when, where & why are missing. So tell us those things and we can help. The current version is too vague for any meaningful conversation.

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