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A highly cultivated test subject flees the clutches of a CIA organization and must determine the purpose of his program while evading capture from government officials.
Cultivate seems like the wrong word. It doesn't mean anything in the context of the logline. Why does he need to figure it out? Would escape by the goal. Why not start with the reason why he has to figure it out. "Escaping torturous experimentation a guy must discover the reason why to ......."
Cultivate seems like the wrong word. It doesn’t mean anything in the context of the logline.
Why does he need to figure it out? Would escape by the goal. Why not start with the reason why he has to figure it out.
“Escaping torturous experimentation a guy must discover the reason why to …….”
See lessAfter her parents die attempting to reach quarantine a teenage girl takes refuge from a pandemic in a valley where she is set upon by a predatory man desperate to save his own daughter at all costs.
I posted this ages ago. ?The story has evolved heaps after working with a producer (no fund came about). ?The script is destined for the archive, but I want to tight logline in case anyone shows interest in the future. ?I'll send the script to anyone interested in reading it. ?No need for feedback.Read more
I posted this ages ago. ?The story has evolved heaps after working with a producer (no fund came about). ?The script is destined for the archive, but I want to tight logline in case anyone shows interest in the future. ?I’ll send the script to anyone interested in reading it. ?No need for feedback. ?Don’t intend to work on it any further. ?The story is out of my head.
See lessWhen a zombie outbreak incites a racist massacre in her small Southern town, a pregnant teen must fight the undead – and her own family – to reunite with the child’s black father.
It works for me. The Walking Dead hasn't been about Zombies for years. You could drop the Location if you want to tighten it.
It works for me. The Walking Dead hasn’t been about Zombies for years.
You could drop the Location if you want to tighten it.
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