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  1. Posted: March 22, 2020In: Drama

    1960 (USA) Two criminals parked roadside, one black, one white, they wait for money to be picked up, but a battle of wits breaks out resulting in one being shot and the money disappearing.

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    Added an answer on March 24, 2020 at 6:54 am

    1960?s USA is an important part. ?There was racism built into society, the black guy may have some power in the relationship, but outside the car he has none. ?When he says something like ?perhaps I inherit the money?, his friend responds ?people like you don?t have rich family?. Plus no mobile phonRead more

    1960?s USA is an important part. ?There was racism built into society, the black guy may have some power in the relationship, but outside the car he has none. ?When he says something like ?perhaps I inherit the money?, his friend responds ?people like you don?t have rich family?.

    Plus no mobile phones. ?Which means they are isolated.

    They are gangster. They are picking up money for they boss.

    In a nutshell – some beats.

    * Car broken down.

    * They begin to talk.

    * They begin to talk about money going missing in the gang. Plus problems with the cops.

    * The black guy begins to lay out why he would be tempted to do what they are talking about. ?This drags information out of the white guy.

    * They get nasty.

     

    We know that one guy has done something wrong. ?But we also see that the black guy has had a hard life, due to racism and everything going on. He is taking advantage of the wrongs of the white guy.

    The story challenges the reader/viewer to try and answer ?is it okay for a person to do something bad to a bad person?. ??Can a person be justified in doing bad things because ?they have been treated bad themselves.?

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  2. Posted: February 20, 2020In: Comedy

    After his wife dies in a car accident, a man must face homelessness raising his three daughters.

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    Added an answer on February 20, 2020 at 3:26 pm

    Struggles with the people around him is a little vague. If you give us a hint of that we will see how it impacts on the story.

    Struggles with the people around him is a little vague.

    If you give us a hint of that we will see how it impacts on the story.

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  3. Posted: June 14, 2019In: SciFi

    In a dystopian right wing world. A terrorist group is planting boxes holding either cash or explosives, opening it makes you rich or dead. A poor man and his friend find one and try to figure out what to do.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 15, 2020 at 4:51 pm

    It is a completed script now called ?Love, Money, Bombs?. It will be available on Script Revolution is a few days. Here is a final logline. But would love suggestions Two strangers discover a terrorist trap which is either a barrel of money or a bomb. One needs the money for his crime boss the otherRead more

    It is a completed script now called ?Love, Money, Bombs?. It will be available on Script Revolution is a few days.

    Here is a final logline. But would love suggestions

    Two strangers discover a terrorist trap which is either a barrel of money or a bomb. One needs the money for his crime boss the other to escape poverty. They must open it to survive, but can?t bring themselves to do it.

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