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  1. Posted: May 12, 2019In: Noir

    After discovering his travelling companion has a bag of cash a man starts a conversation hoping to blackmail him. When that fails he threatens violence that escalates into murder.

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    Added an answer on May 12, 2019 at 5:06 pm

    @Richiev traditionally the main character is the person with most screen time. But with only two characters on a deserted road, they?ll both be in all shots, so two main characters. The idea is that both characters have reasons to hate them and reasons to like them. The audience is challenged to makRead more

    Richiev traditionally the main character is the person with most screen time. But with only two characters on a deserted road, they?ll both be in all shots, so two main characters.

    The idea is that both characters have reasons to hate them and reasons to like them. The audience is challenged to make a decision. ?People can handle complex films. Every time one is a success people are amazed and then go back to boring formula.

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  2. Posted: May 12, 2019In: Horror

    When a crew of mismatched oilfield workers stay late to finish a job in the middle of nowhere, they are attacked by bloodthirsty monsters. They’ll have to band together to fight through blood guts, and teeth if they want to live to see another sunrise.

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    Added an answer on May 12, 2019 at 11:42 am

    Oil riggers are attacked by monsters, they must.... to.... but... Your one is a great setup. But you left us with a generic action film. What makes it great?

    Oil riggers are attacked by monsters, they must…. to…. but…

    Your one is a great setup. But you left us with a generic action film. What makes it great?

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  3. Posted: May 12, 2019In: Crime

    After receiving a personality implant to find a nuclear weapon, the officer starts noticing malfunctions of a previous personality that makes it harder for him to complete his mission.

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    Added an answer on May 12, 2019 at 11:39 am

    There needs to be a little connection between implant and finding the weapon. This will then give you scope for why the previous personality is an issue.

    There needs to be a little connection between implant and finding the weapon. This will then give you scope for why the previous personality is an issue.

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