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  1. Posted: February 22, 2018In: Drama

    A young girl struggles to keep her family together after her mother gets hooked on drugs.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 23, 2018 at 7:08 am

    Can you give us a specific scenario that demonstrates this. Leading up to a court appearance, little sisters parent teacher interview. Little Miss Sunshine was a family falling apart set against a child?s talent show.

    Can you give us a specific scenario that demonstrates this. Leading up to a court appearance, little sisters parent teacher interview.

    Little Miss Sunshine was a family falling apart set against a child?s talent show.

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  2. Posted: February 23, 2018In: Western

    In late nineteenth century America a Ghanaian former slave seeks revenge for the murder of his wife and child; he must team up with his former owner, a retired bounty hunter trying to renounce his violent past.

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    Added an answer on February 23, 2018 at 7:05 am

    This is a nice pitch but not a story. I wouldn?t know what I was going to be involved in. A full western with a flash forward or that mimics a modern shooting. Or a modern shooting story with flashbacks to exactly the same events in the old west. You can do this in a pitch when there is a chance forRead more

    This is a nice pitch but not a story.

    I wouldn?t know what I was going to be involved in. A full western with a flash forward or that mimics a modern shooting. Or a modern shooting story with flashbacks to exactly the same events in the old west.

    You can do this in a pitch when there is a chance for a conversation. But a logline is a single shot.

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  3. Posted: February 23, 2018In: Drama

    Fueled by an encounter with a haunted house, a novice paranormal investigator battles the supernatural for those with nowhere else to turn with her reluctant best friend.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 23, 2018 at 7:01 am

    Feels like a TV show not a film. You have set up a world (TV) and not a story (film). A paranormal investigator that helps the desperate finds a woman that ........... You have pitched a character not a story. If that is all you have at the moment (which is okay) write a story for them.

    Feels like a TV show not a film. You have set up a world (TV) and not a story (film).

    A paranormal investigator that helps the desperate finds a woman that ………..

    You have pitched a character not a story. If that is all you have at the moment (which is okay) write a story for them.

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