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  1. Posted: February 28, 2018In: Thriller

    When a hang slip breaks a house apart shortly after a frustrated mum and wife just told her workaholic husband that she wants a divorce, the whole family has to work together for the last time and survive, by helping each other on the safe side of the house, while its pieces are drifting away from minute to minute and might fall from the mountain soon.

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    Added an answer on March 1, 2018 at 8:29 pm

    Minutes after telling her husband she wants a divorce their house is caught in a landslide. She must work with her family to save each other before the house collapses. Still too wordy. People would help perfect strangers escape. You may want to think of something that puts more pressure on them andRead more

    Minutes after telling her husband she wants a divorce their house is caught in a landslide. She must work with her family to save each other before the house collapses.

    Still too wordy.

    People would help perfect strangers escape. You may want to think of something that puts more pressure on them and would allow to decide not to help.

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  2. Posted: March 1, 2018In: Fantasy

    After an young girl is bought from slavery, she is taken to a school where she becomes a witch, where she uses her abilities to kill her former master and save her family.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 1, 2018 at 4:25 pm

    Blade Runner 2049 is a slave story. About people that have no choice. Look at that. I feel in stories like this there should be a sacrifice. Make your reader love something then kill it. I am basically a dark bastard at heart.

    Blade Runner 2049 is a slave story. About people that have no choice. Look at that.

    I feel in stories like this there should be a sacrifice. Make your reader love something then kill it. I am basically a dark bastard at heart.

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  3. Posted: March 1, 2018In: Fantasy

    After an young girl is bought from slavery, she is taken to a school where she becomes a witch, where she uses her abilities to kill her former master and save her family.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 1, 2018 at 7:50 am

    After joining a coven an ex-slave uses her powers to take revenge on her master and free her family but.... Give us what the challenges are, otherwise it will be John Wick.

    After joining a coven an ex-slave uses her powers to take revenge on her master and free her family but….

    Give us what the challenges are, otherwise it will be John Wick.

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