1. Posted: March 1, 2018In:

    After an young girl is bought from slavery, she is taken to a school where she becomes a witch, where she uses her abilities to kill her former master and save her family.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    When a young girl is bought from slavery by a warlock, she learns the art of witchcraft and returns to kill her former master and find her missing family. Tada.... there is the Logline. I understand the movie now. It?s ?Taken? with magic

    When a young girl is bought from slavery by a warlock, she learns the art of witchcraft and returns to kill her former master and find her missing family.

    Tada…. there is the Logline. I understand the movie now. It?s ?Taken? with magic

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  2. Posted: March 3, 2018In:

    Trapped into a lease with his ex-wife, a young writer must come to terms with single life, all whilst making plans for his future.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    This feels like acTV series not a movie. A movie can be done once, a TV show is s universe. His struggle to come to grips with single life isn?t a single goal.

    This feels like acTV series not a movie. A movie can be done once, a TV show is s universe. His struggle to come to grips with single life isn?t a single goal.

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  3. Posted: March 3, 2018In:

    An outcast sea snail goes against his predatorial upbringing to find a new life with his biological rivals; the soldier crabs.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    You might need a goal an and obstacle. But wil high concept loglines that sometimes isn?t needed. The winner of a recent Logline competition was ?A man clones his wife so he can fall in love with her again?.

    You might need a goal an and obstacle. But wil high concept loglines that sometimes isn?t needed.

    The winner of a recent Logline competition was ?A man clones his wife so he can fall in love with her again?.

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