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  1. Posted: March 9, 2018In: Action

    When a psycho is released on parole from prison, the cop that put him away races against time to stop from burning down the city, along with his girlfriend.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 9, 2018 at 12:19 pm

    Okay just a little messy. Burn down the town and burn the girlfriend Burn down the town assisted by his girlfriend And whose girlfriend she is? Plus calling him a psycho is a bit questionable. If he was mad he wouldn?t be released he?d be in care. Is he actually going to burn down an entire town? SoRead more

    Okay just a little messy.

    Burn down the town and burn the girlfriend
    Burn down the town assisted by his girlfriend

    And whose girlfriend she is?

    Plus calling him a psycho is a bit questionable. If he was mad he wouldn?t be released he?d be in care.

    Is he actually going to burn down an entire town?

    So here is my take:

    A cop has to stop a pyromaniac ex-con and his equally mad girlfriend from taking revenge on his town for the years he was in prison.

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  2. Posted: March 8, 2018In: Crime

    When the mentor of ruthless assassin/lone wolf cop is murdered, the assassin/cop bands his team of skilled corrupt cops/best friends together to find the one responsible.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 9, 2018 at 6:25 am

    A corrupt cop and his friend avenge the murder of his mentor but..... so he must ...... to ........ You have a setup. But the story isn?t in your Logline.

    A corrupt cop and his friend avenge the murder of his mentor but….. so he must …… to ……..

    You have a setup. But the story isn?t in your Logline.

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  3. Posted: March 7, 2018In: Family

    In a world overrun by carrot obsessed rabbits, one bunny must fight this urge to save the last carrot on Earth.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 8, 2018 at 6:39 am

    If we can drop in why, it?s a good Pixar pitch. Hoping grow more a rabbit in ......

    If we can drop in why, it?s a good Pixar pitch.

    Hoping grow more a rabbit in ……

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