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When an abusive, powerful sniper surfaces to take back his ex-girlfriend, the godfather reaches out to a former assassin to defend her until the sniper is dead.
A former sniper is tasked by The Godfather to protect his daughter from her sniper ex-boyfriend. The add the complexity. You had burried the story a little bit. I moved it up front.
A former sniper is tasked by The Godfather to protect his daughter from her sniper ex-boyfriend.
The add the complexity. You had burried the story a little bit. I moved it up front.
See lessWhen the world?s greatest and most hated superhero is forced into retirement after yet another fuck up, he searches for his successor via a reality television show where each week contestants battle against villains and each other to prove they can become the next Universal Hero.
Keep with the retiring hero. There is a lot of gold in that: Can?t let go of his glory days The ?you don?t do it that way? People like the new guy more than him etc Start with forced into retirement. The other stuff you can show in the action of the Logline. A bitter superhero forced into retirementRead more
Keep with the retiring hero. There is a lot of gold in that:
Can?t let go of his glory days
The ?you don?t do it that way?
People like the new guy more than him etc
Start with forced into retirement. The other stuff you can show in the action of the Logline.
A bitter superhero forced into retirement uses a reality show to find his successor.
We all know what reality shows look like. So you have space to add some story about his emotional journey.
See lessA fierce weretiger battles an ancient vampire and the ideologies of her elders as she attempts to protect the woman she loves from an evil that threatens to return and destroy the earth.
You do need to tie the evil and the vampire attacks together otherwise one is a B story and can be dropped. I also think you have burried the story. To protect the woman she loves..... And take it from there.
You do need to tie the evil and the vampire attacks together otherwise one is a B story and can be dropped.
I also think you have burried the story.
To protect the woman she loves…..
And take it from there.
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