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  1. Posted: March 22, 2018In: SciFi

    An alien politician whose world was colonised by humans must fight a corrupt system and a supremacist organisation to rise to the top.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 22, 2018 at 12:07 pm

    I see this as ET meets Ghandi The Alien wants to win office to bring about change and return self determination. An alien wants to win an election and get the power to expell humans that colonised his plant but a corrupt system and attack by human supremacist put himself and all he loves in danger.Read more

    I see this as ET meets Ghandi

    The Alien wants to win office to bring about change and return self determination.

    An alien wants to win an election and get the power to expell humans that colonised his plant but a corrupt system and attack by human supremacist put himself and all he loves in danger.

    Really wordy. But my first attempt.

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  2. Posted: March 21, 2018In: Noir

    When a young man washes-up dead in a desolate coastal town, his self-centred estranged mother must fight against apathy and hostility to uncover the truth, at the risk of exposing her own culpability.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 21, 2018 at 3:09 pm

    Why the apathy and hostility? Is it her fault? These need to be answered to set tone and logic. ?When her estranged son is found dead in her small coastal town she must she must... to get the cops to take interest even if it incriminates her?

    Why the apathy and hostility? Is it her fault?

    These need to be answered to set tone and logic.

    ?When her estranged son is found dead in her small coastal town she must she must… to get the cops to take interest even if it incriminates her?

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  3. Posted: March 20, 2018In: Drama

    A professional doppelganger of a famous actor, impregnates both his wife and his lover. Using his fame as his currency, he pays a hefty price for adultery.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 20, 2018 at 9:04 am

    Remove all ambiguity ?pays a hefty price? is meaningless in isolation. You have to be as specific as possible.

    Remove all ambiguity ?pays a hefty price? is meaningless in isolation. You have to be as specific as possible.

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