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A murdered ex-con is resurrected and blessed with the power to heal. He must learn to be a saint when others would rather him be a sinner.
I can fill in some blanks as a reader. His healing is meant to teach him a new way. This would set him on the right path, etc. The only bit I have issue with is “the others”. A villain/antagonist must have their own logic otherwise it is just a cartoon villain. Why do they want to see him fail. ThisRead more
I can fill in some blanks as a reader. His healing is meant to teach him a new way. This would set him on the right path, etc.
The only bit I have issue with is “the others”.
A villain/antagonist must have their own logic otherwise it is just a cartoon villain. Why do they want to see him fail. This may give you room to bring in the overall theme.
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He is the devil. The devil is the beast. The term is a play on word “666 the number of the beast”. He is the devil and struggles with that. It is an episodic style comedy.
He is the devil. The devil is the beast. The term is a play on word “666 the number of the beast”.
He is the devil and struggles with that. It is an episodic style comedy.
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Thanks. “Joins” for me is the outcome not the trigger. Regardless of him being sent there, requesting a transfer or as a promotion, he joined them. Word choice. I’ll try to find something better. The stakes are his struggles. He is perhaps suicidal (the writing will tell me. But I could believe it).Read more
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“Joins” for me is the outcome not the trigger. Regardless of him being sent there, requesting a transfer or as a promotion, he joined them. Word choice. I’ll try to find something better.
The stakes are his struggles. He is perhaps suicidal (the writing will tell me. But I could believe it). He wants to get back to undercover, but that ship has sailed, which he can’t accept. It is a struggle with identity, purpose and self worth (betrayal). As the investigation unfolds, he sees that his ex-supervisor (which is involved) is willing to sell him out, betray him.
At some level it is his life at stake. Not a binary “win/lose” goal. I know that makes it more difficult to visualise.
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