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  1. Posted: July 9, 2020In: Drama

    A young black man accidentally travels to the past. He is decided to save his great-grandmother, a slave, with the help of her owner’s son

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 9, 2020 at 8:15 am

    What are the obstacles and/or outcomes. Time travel is always tricky. Travelling back in time a young black man attempts to save his slave great grandmother but.... forcing him to .... That sort of thing. I do like the idea.

    What are the obstacles and/or outcomes. Time travel is always tricky.

    Travelling back in time a young black man attempts to save his slave great grandmother but…. forcing him to ….

    That sort of thing. I do like the idea.

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  2. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Noir

    Missing – A broken undercover cop and rookie detective are transferred into missing persons. During investigating a missing woman they discover links to one of his old undercover cases and a cover up by his former handler.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 9, 2020 at 8:10 am

    Torn between loyalty to his undercover past and doing the right thing a broken ex-uncover cop joins missing persons. During his investigation he discovers a link to an undercover operation he was involved in and a cover up by his old supervisor.

    Torn between loyalty to his undercover past and doing the right thing a broken ex-uncover cop joins missing persons. During his investigation he discovers a link to an undercover operation he was involved in and a cover up by his old supervisor.

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  3. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Noir

    Missing – A broken undercover cop and rookie detective are transferred into missing persons. During investigating a missing woman they discover links to one of his old undercover cases and a cover up by his former handler.

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    Replied to answer on July 3, 2020 at 1:43 pm

    Thanks. Having them transferred in, I hope, indicates that they are not long term partners. They don’t have each other’s backs (yet). The rookie would be more keen to not ruin his career for a person he hardly knows, especially since he just got that chance. Working undercover takes years sometiRead more

    Thanks. Having them transferred in, I hope, indicates that they are not long term partners. They don’t have each other’s backs (yet). The rookie would be more keen to not ruin his career for a person he hardly knows, especially since he just got that chance.

    Working undercover takes years sometimes. He has been traumatised. He thinks he can handle the pressure but he can’t. He came out of UC with a drug problem, which is he going to NA to get under control. He is impulsive and doesn’t think to far ahead.

    When he begins to see links back to his old cases he wants to look into it himself. He is loyal to undercover and knows he did some shady stuff. His partner doesn’t want to be involved. First conflict between them. If UC could have his way he would go back. He can’t see the value of normal police work. About half way through when he sees that his old handler may be involved he is emotionally unsure what to do. He can’t bring himself to betray the person that held his life in his hands for years.

    There is no resolution in the logline. Because I am not 100% sure how it ends. I have the UC throw himself on his sword, and take the wrap for stuff they did. He doesn’t want to rookie to be tarred with his brush.

    I’ll think about it and post an updated.

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