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When looters attack their home, a blind mother suffering paranoia from being unable to see must escape from the danger with her family.
Blind and paranoia is an obvious thing. Being visually impaired doesn’t normally cause mental illness. Paranoia isn’t also an issue. She is being attacked. She is right to feel people are out to get her. Looters attacking her home? That may be a momentary problem. You may want to find a differenRead more
Blind and paranoia is an obvious thing. Being visually impaired doesn’t normally cause mental illness. Paranoia isn’t also an issue. She is being attacked. She is right to feel people are out to get her.
Looters attacking her home? That may be a momentary problem. You may want to find a different way of bringing a threat to the woman. But I do like it. I once had an escaped prison enter a woman’s home during a mega storm and she was forced to help him escape.
Her family? Kids? Husband? Why is it on her to lead? We need that here as well.
When a blind woman is trapped in her house by riots, she is forced to flee with her children when looters attack her home.
We could up the stakes a little.
When a blind woman is trapped in her house by riots, she is forced to flee with her children when looters attack her home in a violent rampage.
There are some good bones here.
See lessThe ice caps have melted. The air supply is poisoned. The human race teeters on the brink of survival. One woman strives to challenge the re-emerging patriarchy. When the situation arises, how will society choose to rebuild itself?
Teeter on extinction, not survival, reads better. If a man or a woman leads the come back seems trivial against the stakes, the death of humanity.
Teeter on extinction, not survival, reads better. If a man or a woman leads the come back seems trivial against the stakes, the death of humanity.
See lessAfter killing her abusive husband, a desperate woman avoids detection by destroying the evidence, will this clandestine, gory and surreal mother-daughter journey be exposed by the ex-cop next door?
Are they on the run and he is a new neighbour? Did they kill him and hide the body? Did she kill him and make it look like an accident? These are all parts that I sort of need. What is the relationship with the neighbour? After disguising killing her husband as a home invasion a wife and daughter muRead more
Are they on the run and he is a new neighbour? Did they kill him and hide the body? Did she kill him and make it look like an accident? These are all parts that I sort of need. What is the relationship with the neighbour?
After disguising killing her husband as a home invasion a wife and daughter must…. after her ex-cop neighbour start making his own enquires.
Disguising the murder of her abusive husband as natural causes a mother and daughter come under the eye of their ex-cop neighbour forcing them to …… so ……
That sort of thing.
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