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When a gigantic firestorm burns through a family’s horse ranch in October 2003, the miracles it leaves behind bring Grant, an accomplished physicist, to the brink of believing in something more powerful than science.
My fellow logliners will disagree. But tell them the story. My brother had read the lord of the rings every year since he was 13. At 45 we went to a midnight screen on day one. Producers don’t need intrigue. They need to be able to make a decision. They are not the audience, they are your future cRead more
My fellow logliners will disagree. But tell them the story. My brother had read the lord of the rings every year since he was 13. At 45 we went to a midnight screen on day one. Producers don’t need intrigue. They need to be able to make a decision. They are not the audience, they are your future collaborators.
They also do not see your logline in isolation. They have 1000 to review. So one that isn’t clear what the movie is about, is not given a second thought. This is my belief and approach to the world. Like I said, my fellow logliners will disagree.
So what have we got.
A kid falling from a tree, magic apples deposited by a firestorm and potentially a person that doesn’t pick up on clues.
What is the genre, budget, lead character, era… I don’t have enough to make a decision.
I hope my rant helps.
See lessIn the aftermath of a school shooting, the perpetrator’s loner best friend becomes a romantically involved with a popular girl who was injured in the incident. Their relationship is put to the test when he is forced to testify at an inquest that he had foreknowledge of the tragedy.
In the aftermath of a school shooting. A young couples relationship and their lives are put to the test when he is forced to testify that he had knowledge prior to the tragedy perpetrated by his friend. I think the added colour doesn’t help. Loner best friend and popular girl. Doesn’t push the sRead more
In the aftermath of a school shooting. A young couples relationship and their lives are put to the test when he is forced to testify that he had knowledge prior to the tragedy perpetrated by his friend.
I think the added colour doesn’t help. Loner best friend and popular girl. Doesn’t push the story along. Him being a loner doesn’t impact on the logline or does that she is the popular girl.
You can take out THEIR LIVES reference. I was just thinking about their lives in their communities etc. But that may be the thing that is putting their relationship to the test.
See lessA man is seduced into robbing his lover’s psychotic boyfriend, when he does, they go on the run – but soon question whether they can trust each other.
After helping robbing his lover?s psychotic boyfriend, the couple go on the run to avoid ..... but ...... forcing ........ What do they want to achieve or avoid? What is their goal, preferably in life.
After helping robbing his lover?s psychotic boyfriend, the couple go on the run to avoid ….. but …… forcing ……..
What do they want to achieve or avoid?
What is their goal, preferably in life.
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