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To counter a growing malevolence, a young woman in 16th century England, must embrace both her growing powers and her destiny to change the course of history.
This leaves too many questions. ?Like what powers? ?Is she a witch? What does she hope to achieve?you see what I am saying. ?This is good set up, but not enough detail about the story.
This leaves too many questions. ?Like what powers? ?Is she a witch? What does she hope to achieve?
you see what I am saying. ?This is good set up, but not enough detail about the story.
See lessA guy walks in a bar to find himself in the middle of a heist.
This is a common misconception when people believe a logline must focus on the first act and not the entire story.
This is a common misconception when people believe a logline must focus on the first act and not the entire story.
See lessA Brainwashed boy genius is busted out of his facility and joins the fight against the corporate system that taught him to win at all costs.
The story is in the telling. People don?t have to like your character, they have to understand your character. Characters have to be relatable not likeable. Now. It is a bit vague. It could be Amway or the Church. We need details. Plus the brainwashing seems to have no impact. Busting out implies heRead more
The story is in the telling. People don?t have to like your character, they have to understand your character. Characters have to be relatable not likeable.
Now. It is a bit vague. It could be Amway or the Church. We need details. Plus the brainwashing seems to have no impact. Busting out implies he was being held captive, but brainwashing would have had him as a willing participant.
He needs a goal ?make public the program?
He needs an obstacle ?corporate PR hiding the truth?
A boy genius being held by a corporation as a test subject joins the group that broke him out, they carry out raids to find the proof to expose the horrors in the name of science.
Probably not your story. But it has more detail.
We have his goal, revenge by exposing them, justice for the kids.
Obstacles, hidden info.
Action a series of raids.
Play with these ideas.
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