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When a medieval princess releases an evil spirit that intends to murder her husband, she must find a way to destroy the spirit and save her husband.
Answer these questions which I think we let the reader know how you intend to retell this story. What was she doing when she released the spirit? Not physically, but her goal. What is she doing to try and destroy the spirit? Why is it failing? The last bit of the logline is the entire movie and youRead more
Answer these questions which I think we let the reader know how you intend to retell this story.
What was she doing when she released the spirit? Not physically, but her goal.
What is she doing to try and destroy the spirit?
Why is it failing?
The last bit of the logline is the entire movie and you have jumped over the best bits.
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Yep. This is good marketing. But if you were a producer looking for a script and you had 100 loglines to choose from (which is common), would you be bothered chancing up your one? I can?t tell what the story is, and time is money. Would I be willing to spend money to find out what that s story is?
Yep.
This is good marketing. But if you were a producer looking for a script and you had 100 loglines to choose from (which is common), would you be bothered chancing up your one?
I can?t tell what the story is, and time is money. Would I be willing to spend money to find out what that s story is?
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Who is the protagonist? If it's the memory guy, what is his goal? What is at stake for him? It seems to be a narrative about a day at the office.
Who is the protagonist? If it’s the memory guy, what is his goal? What is at stake for him? It seems to be a narrative about a day at the office.
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