1. Posted: May 3, 2017In:

    When an alcoholic son discovers his father gets occasionally possessed by a harmful evil spirit, he must protect his family from danger that threatens them and then find a way to stop it for good.

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    I suggest adding a conflict which makes it difficult for the son to kick the alcohol habit.

    I suggest adding a conflict which makes it difficult for the son to kick the alcohol habit.

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  2. Posted: May 4, 2017In:

    250 Years into the future, the US and others have shied more and more from democracy. A Young Man working for NASA is chosen to be part of a team mission to explore a new planet found far away that could potentially be a new home for humans, away from corrupt governments and war. The discoveries he and his team make will change them forever.

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    What obstacles are they facing? Is it the travel? Is it what they find when they get there?

    What obstacles are they facing? Is it the travel? Is it what they find when they get there?

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  3. Posted: May 4, 2017In:

    Short Film: An old black man living in a quiet retirement home finds a record player than, when used, makes the listener(s) young again..

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    I like the idea...it sounds like a similar concept to "Hot Tub Time Machine." Does the conflict come when they are young? Do they discover something about their past? Do they just become young in the present time...or do they go back in time? Do they come to realize that age and experience is betterRead more

    I like the idea…it sounds like a similar concept to “Hot Tub Time Machine.” Does the conflict come when they are young? Do they discover something about their past? Do they just become young in the present time…or do they go back in time? Do they come to realize that age and experience is better/worse than being young again? How young do they become?

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