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  1. Posted: November 25, 2014In: Public

    When a rejected talking golf ball loses his original owner, he teams up with his new friend to enact revenge.

    Donn Curbow Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 29, 2014 at 9:47 am

    New friend is Sara..snotty kids ex girlfriend who get's hit by Bally at the end. She's rejected by Josh cause he's now moving on..to something better, he won. Henry discards Bally for failing to help him win. Bally's beyond mad because he belonged to one of the rich kids before Josh use him to hit HRead more

    New friend is Sara..snotty kids ex girlfriend who get’s hit by Bally at the end. She’s rejected by Josh cause he’s now moving on..to something better, he won.

    Henry discards Bally for failing to help him win. Bally’s beyond mad because he belonged to one of the rich kids before Josh use him to hit Henry in the head.

    Henry realizes it’s all mental, in which now Sara..being hit..realizes her mental side with Bally..and they use each other to get revenge.

    Love of the game..golf..no. All of my golf friends hated the ending to Tin Cup..cause that was a mental ending. In real life, that never happens, but Hollywood spins it to make it mental.

    I don’t think it’s a tough sell..not as Danny DeVito as the voice. Both feed backs on it from down south we’re positive, but less golf and more interaction between the characters. And that’s what I’ve pushed for on both the movies. More mental..like real golf.

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  2. Posted: November 25, 2014In: Public

    When a rejected talking golf ball loses his original owner, he teams up with his new friend to enact revenge.

    Donn Curbow Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 29, 2014 at 9:47 am

    New friend is Sara..snotty kids ex girlfriend who get's hit by Bally at the end. She's rejected by Josh cause he's now moving on..to something better, he won. Henry discards Bally for failing to help him win. Bally's beyond mad because he belonged to one of the rich kids before Josh use him to hit HRead more

    New friend is Sara..snotty kids ex girlfriend who get’s hit by Bally at the end. She’s rejected by Josh cause he’s now moving on..to something better, he won.

    Henry discards Bally for failing to help him win. Bally’s beyond mad because he belonged to one of the rich kids before Josh use him to hit Henry in the head.

    Henry realizes it’s all mental, in which now Sara..being hit..realizes her mental side with Bally..and they use each other to get revenge.

    Love of the game..golf..no. All of my golf friends hated the ending to Tin Cup..cause that was a mental ending. In real life, that never happens, but Hollywood spins it to make it mental.

    I don’t think it’s a tough sell..not as Danny DeVito as the voice. Both feed backs on it from down south we’re positive, but less golf and more interaction between the characters. And that’s what I’ve pushed for on both the movies. More mental..like real golf.

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  3. Posted: November 25, 2014In: Public

    When a rejected talking golf ball loses his original owner, he teams up with his new friend to enact revenge.

    Donn Curbow Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 27, 2014 at 3:26 am

    I just wanted to post that your idea on this was very good. My research on this showed me things that are very clear..money is tight. So I decided I wanted to stay away from the bigger picture..the ones that cost millions to make and involving the PGA or another golf course would certainly start toRead more

    I just wanted to post that your idea on this was very good. My research on this showed me things that are very clear..money is tight. So I decided I wanted to stay away from the bigger picture..the ones that cost millions to make and involving the PGA or another golf course would certainly start to add up, but I wanted more of a down to earth movie in which those who don’t like golf would still understand it and have fun and laugh.

    I perp. liked the mischievous golf pro..since I have golfed since birth…my movie actually depicts golf and some of those who teach/play as some who are ruining it. Over the years I think golf has lost some of its luster do to overpaying and just the way they act when they get beat. Just because you got money and get lessons everyday, doesn’t mean a person with more talent can’t beat you. If I had a dime for everyone of those I met…..

    Just a note, thanks bud.
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