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A revengeful ghost uses their tablet PC to plague a young family. The young mother saves them – at the cost of a horrific sacrifice.Logline:
Agree with the previous posters. Tighten it up and highlight the hero. Example to highlight the mother: A young mother fights to save her family from a vengeful ghost who haunts them through their tablets. Horrific sacrifice tells us nothing. So tell us or leave it out.
Agree with the previous posters. Tighten it up and highlight the hero. Example to highlight the mother:
A young mother fights to save her family from a vengeful ghost who haunts them through their tablets.
Horrific sacrifice tells us nothing. So tell us or leave it out.
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An insecure person has no self confidence to regain as they never had it. You need a different word for regain or ?change the protag description.
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I love the title. It really makes the logline work. That being said, using a franchised character may present all kinds of hurdles. Doing so makes the logline justifiably short. As much as I'd like to recommend rewriting it without using this famous character I think this is a movie I'd like to seeRead more
I love the title. It really makes the logline work. That being said, using a franchised character may present all kinds of hurdles. Doing so makes the logline justifiably short. As much as I’d like to recommend rewriting it without using this famous character I think this is a movie I’d like to see (or write). Have fun with it and good luck.
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