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  1. Posted: December 24, 2012In: Public

    The great British icon suffers the slings and arrows of outrageous farce when an illiterate English twit, Will, and a black fry cook, Shakespeare, team up to become the world?s single greatest playwright.

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    Added an answer on January 1, 2013 at 1:06 am

    Geno, did you miss my storyline logline or just not like it? From above: An illiterate English twit, Will, and a black fry-cook, Shakespeare must convert The Beggars Guild into a Theatre Troupe before the sheriff decides to jail them as a public nuisance.

    Geno, did you miss my storyline logline or just not like it?

    From above:

    An illiterate English twit, Will, and a black fry-cook, Shakespeare must convert The Beggars Guild into a Theatre Troupe before the sheriff decides to jail them as a public nuisance.

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  2. Posted: December 24, 2012In: Public

    The great British icon suffers the slings and arrows of outrageous farce when an illiterate English twit, Will, and a black fry cook, Shakespeare, team up to become the world?s single greatest playwright.

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    Added an answer on December 25, 2012 at 3:13 am

    Thanks Carllord, I hope that is not the case with "the Great British icon' and I think the title, Will 'n Shakespeare, and character names, Will 'n Shakespeare, helps with that a bit. :C) Debbiemoon, I had a logline that indicated a conflict: An illiterate English twit, Will, and a black fry-cook, SRead more

    Thanks Carllord, I hope that is not the case with “the Great British icon’ and I think the title, Will ‘n Shakespeare, and character names, Will ‘n Shakespeare, helps with that a bit. :C)

    Debbiemoon, I had a logline that indicated a conflict:

    An illiterate English twit, Will, and a black fry-cook, Shakespeare must convert The Beggars Guild into a Theatre Troupe before the sheriff decides to jail them as a public nuisance.

    And though the movie follows that plot line it’s farcical nature makes it more a joke on language, culture, theater, literature, and such more than any plot line.

    But nonetheless, here’s the short synopsis:

    Will, an illiterate twit has the dream of being a playwright. He won’t let a little thing, like not being able to read or write, stop him. He goes as far as trading the family cow for a magic words book. When his dad discovers the book to be fake Will is barred from Stratford-on-Avon.

    Will travels to London with his Mum. There he meets the love of his life, Juliet – the Virgin Prostitute, and finds employment at his Uncle Omelet?s “Beggars Guild?. On his first day, he manages to have the guild shut down by the sheriff for fraud; seems all the beggars were only actors, faking their afflictions. No longer allowed to work the streets, Will and his uncle form a theater group but instantly realized they are missing something ? a hook ? something that will draw in high society and the big bucks.

    Enter the head fry-cook of the Black Friars Pub whose African name was impossible to pronounce, but literally translated, meant easy to anger; not one to shake a spear at?… that’s right… Shakespeare. Up until now, all the characters spoke with low-brow accents (English, Cockney, Scottish, Irish, Italian, French) but Shakespeare speaks with such eloquence… such lyrical phrasing… that it has developed into a language of its own ? Elizabethan Ebonics. People found it captivating, but, much like with their opera and ballet, they were too sophisticated to admit that they couldn’t understand it!

    As Omelet and Mum put the cast and crew together Will ‘n Shakespeare work on the play. Will provides the plot and Shakespeare pens the dialog. And now, it?s a race to have a successful opening night before the sheriff can close them down… again.

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  3. Posted: December 24, 2012In: Public

    When a basketball star learns of his own childhood abduction and time lost with his now deceased father, emotions and fears become his fiercest rival, putting the national championship in jeopardy.

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    Added an answer on December 24, 2012 at 1:57 am

    Much, much better! There's a little clunkiness with "and time lost with his now deceased father' but that's going to be a hard concept to 'clean' up. If I think of anything I'll let you know. But, still a winner as is. Good work.

    Much, much better! There’s a little clunkiness with “and time lost with his now deceased father’ but that’s going to be a hard concept to ‘clean’ up. If I think of anything I’ll let you know. But, still a winner as is. Good work.

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