1. Posted: November 29, 2012In:

    When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook and fight to save an ancient, mystical duck recipe.

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    Cheese and duck? Don't think so. Could use some spicing up though. Not really savoring this one.

    Cheese and duck? Don’t think so. Could use some spicing up though. Not really savoring this one.

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  2. Posted: November 28, 2012In:

    Wealthy British aristocrat attempts to start over by relocating with his trusty maid to Beverley Hills. Becoming an unlikely hero, continuously saving the day, just wasn?t in the plans.

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    I think I like this idea a lot. Of course what I have in my head may be quite different than what you have. So a few questions. Why is he starting over? He's moved to Beverly Hills so I assume his fortune is intact. Can we nail down the Trusty Maid? Would we like to... as in romantic connection (akaRead more

    I think I like this idea a lot. Of course what I have in my head may be quite different than what you have. So a few questions.

    Why is he starting over? He’s moved to Beverly Hills so I assume his fortune is intact.

    Can we nail down the Trusty Maid? Would we like to… as in romantic connection (aka a French maid)? Or is she a family heirloom (crusty and trusty)?

    What kind of Hero? Super hero (crime)? Benefactor type hero (money)? Relationship type hero (Dr. Laura)? Hero to whom? Sounds almost like you could change it to Santa and a trusty elf and have yourself a cute little Christmas movie.

    As you can see a little tightening might be beneficial. Still I like it.

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  3. Posted: November 14, 2012In:

    When the government release swarms of drug eating insects to kill the junkie population a self-righteous policeman risks everything as he struggles to save his drug using sister from the tyrannical forces of prohibition.

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    Thanks for the explanation. With that in mind you might consider making it more a part of the conflict than character description... in the logline A crusading policeman must reassess his self-righteous nature when a government plan to use mutant insects to kill junkies indiscriminately targets hisRead more

    Thanks for the explanation. With that in mind you might consider making it more a part of the conflict than character description… in the logline

    A crusading policeman must reassess his self-righteous nature when a government plan to use mutant insects to kill junkies indiscriminately targets his drug using sister.

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