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Revision: An unhappy couple enters the Wife Carrying Contest, per the request of a young rookie psychologist, in hopes that it will revitalize their marriage.
And I'd go ahead and change the title to: The Wife Carrying Contest. Then you don't have to use it in your logline.
And I’d go ahead and change the title to: The Wife Carrying Contest. Then you don’t have to use it in your logline.
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Okay, I found out (from your previous post) what a wife carrying contest is. So now you need to figure out how to work the conflict into the logline. The wife is in it for the beer and the husband feels he's carrying all the marital load. I just think you need something in the logline to pull off thRead more
Okay, I found out (from your previous post) what a wife carrying contest is. So now you need to figure out how to work the conflict into the logline. The wife is in it for the beer and the husband feels he’s carrying all the marital load. I just think you need something in the logline to pull off the connection to the contest. Keeping it short is going to be tough.
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'young' and 'rookie' are redundant (for a logline, yeah I know an old dude could be a rookie psych but that's not the usual assumptive leap). I have no idea what a "Wife Carrying Contest" so it has little impact in the logline. When I re-phrase the logline this is what I get. When a rookie psychologRead more
‘young’ and ‘rookie’ are redundant (for a logline, yeah I know an old dude could be a rookie psych but that’s not the usual assumptive leap). I have no idea what a “Wife Carrying Contest” so it has little impact in the logline. When I re-phrase the logline this is what I get.
When a rookie psychologist enters a young couple in a contest to revitalize their marriage…
It’s incomplete… and I’ve used half of the 30 word max count.
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