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When the government release swarms of drug eating insects to kill the junkie population a self-righteous policeman risks everything as he struggles to save his drug using sister from the tyrannical forces of prohibition.
Oops! A slight fix to get it to 30 words: A secret plan to kill junkies with mutant insects projects a DEA agents?s ?casual use? sister as ?acceptable collateral damage?. He takes on a swarm of self-righteous administrators and bugs.
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A slight fix to get it to 30 words:
A secret plan to kill junkies with mutant insects projects a DEA agents?s ?casual use? sister as ?acceptable collateral damage?. He takes on a swarm of self-righteous administrators and bugs.
See lessWhen the government release swarms of drug eating insects to kill the junkie population a self-righteous policeman risks everything as he struggles to save his drug using sister from the tyrannical forces of prohibition.
Not sure I like the phrase 'self righteous'. With it's negative connotation you could be starting off with a hero nobody likes. That's okay in a script but in a logline it can be troublesome. It almost makes me want the sister to be the protag. Also you might want to give the guy more of a connectioRead more
Not sure I like the phrase ‘self righteous’. With it’s negative connotation you could be starting off with a hero nobody likes. That’s okay in a script but in a logline it can be troublesome. It almost makes me want the sister to be the protag. Also you might want to give the guy more of a connection to the program: When the government’s secret plan to kill junkies with mutant insects projects a DEA administrator’s ‘casual use’ sister as ‘acceptable collateral damage’ he takes on a swarm of self righteous DEA agents.
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See lessWhen a madman tortures an entire school to hold a young girl captive, in order to save her, her father must uncover the vaccination plot responsible for his sister's death.
Sorry for the smarmy answer. But, smarmy though it may be, I hope it helps you see what I'm seeing. which is confusion. So much so that I can't see how to fix it or if it's fixable.
Sorry for the smarmy answer. But, smarmy though it may be, I hope it helps you see what I’m seeing. which is confusion. So much so that I can’t see how to fix it or if it’s fixable.
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