This is wonderful feedback. Thank you.

So, your guess is pretty close to the story. ?Which?makes me feel okay because perhaps I may not have a horrible story just a sub-par log line 🙂

Here is the quick summary of the plot – Part of her job and the group of spies she is working with is to seduce allied soldiers of interest and obtain information. ?This is something that actually happened. ?(in my version, she is more of a modern bad ass, as well) ?The back story and first ten pages deal with ?her ?abrupt separation from her parents, their deaths and her seeking out an alternate “family” group ?during the war.?The Allied ?soldier never gets kidnapped, he is being set up for that. ?Himself and the men in his group(?) ?are going to be captured and murdered if she does not ?make the decision to betray her family of spies and “save” him . ?It’s not as easy as just telling him because of her commitment?to her group and the watchful eye of a rival. ? The romance is her ?intellectual turning point, ?his unique character humanizes the “other”.

I really appreciate your feedback. Extremely helpful. Thanks.

I am going to sit on your advice over night and write a new logline tomorrow. ? Hopefully, I get closer. 🙂

If you have any time to give feedback on this, I would greatly appreciate.