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An out-world war destines a bio-molecular energy, ineffectual in fusion with any previous life form to Planet Earth, where a benevolent and jubilant father-to-be unwittingly absorbs it and must engage in battle with the implacable beings pursuing the power source for galactic dominion.
Have to add, that everyone's replies are the collective right answer. I'm learning much.
Have to add, that everyone’s replies are the collective right answer. I’m learning much.
See lessAn out-world war destines a bio-molecular energy, ineffectual in fusion with any previous life form to Planet Earth, where a benevolent and jubilant father-to-be unwittingly absorbs it and must engage in battle with the implacable beings pursuing the power source for galactic dominion.
Back to rewrite. Again, thanks to all. Great insight as always.
Back to rewrite. Again, thanks to all. Great insight as always.
See less"An ordinary young man, is physiologically transmuted by an unimaginable energy that predates history and is irrevocably forced to become humankind?s sole savior when a diabolical alien race, seeking that power wants to blow up the Earth."
Everyone - I'm reworking the specifics. Let me tweak it and give it a brand new go. All your tips ARE helpful. Truth!
Everyone – I’m reworking the specifics. Let me tweak it and give it a brand new go. All your tips ARE helpful. Truth!
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