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"An ordinary young man, is physiologically transmuted by an unimaginable energy that predates history and is irrevocably forced to become humankind?s sole savior when a diabolical alien race, seeking that power wants to blow up the Earth."
Richiev - I am very grateful for your contribution. It has allowed me to obtain a clearer perspective on this logline goal. Believe me, no hoping. It's working.
Richiev – I am very grateful for your contribution. It has allowed me to obtain a clearer perspective on this logline goal. Believe me, no hoping. It’s working.
See less"An ordinary young man, is physiologically transmuted by an unimaginable energy that predates history and is irrevocably forced to become humankind?s sole savior when a diabolical alien race, seeking that power wants to blow up the Earth."
Thank you so much FFF. This is exactly why I posted the logline as I had it. I'm testing how others perceive it so I can obtain such good FFFeedback and improve on this. I'm reading everyone's helpful comments and back to the writing board.
Thank you so much FFF. This is exactly why I posted the logline as I had it. I’m testing how others perceive it so I can obtain such good FFFeedback and improve on this. I’m reading everyone’s helpful comments and back to the writing board.
See lessAn amnesiac who wakes up chained to a table in a mysterious room must uncover why sinister doctors are performing grisly operations on him.
I feel you can achieve an interesting viewpoint here. Having an amnesiac as a starting point immediately caught my attention, yet, the rest seems vague. Try to discover a very peculiar goal about his location, augment the antagonistic factor of his captors and perhaps play a mind game here with theRead more
I feel you can achieve an interesting viewpoint here. Having an amnesiac as a starting point immediately caught my attention, yet, the rest seems vague. Try to discover a very peculiar goal about his location, augment the antagonistic factor of his captors and perhaps play a mind game here with the plot. He’s an amnesiac, so throw in a higher obstacle in order for him to be able to escape as an addition or sub-plot. You have good grounds here for depth about the installation he’s in and twist it with opposites. He must escape by “remembering” a set of 3 codes which comprise a difficult ordeal in itself, worse yet after the trouble to discover them in the first place. Elaborate, tighten and let’s see what you can improve on the next round.
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