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When a madman tortures an entire school to hold a young girl captive, in order to save her, her father must uncover the vaccination plot responsible for his sister's death.
I'm with cynosurer. It's very confusing. You need to tell us who the main?character is? What does he desire; what does he want? We also need to know his?antagonist; who is he fighting? I take it from what is written that the main character is the the girl's father. But who is he? What kind of personRead more
I’m with cynosurer. It’s very confusing. You need to tell us who the main?character is? What does he desire; what does he want? We also need to know his?antagonist; who is he fighting? I take it from what is written that the main character is the the girl’s father. But who is he? What kind of person is he at the beginning of the story? And how does this link to the his desire to save his daughter and “uncover the vaccination plot”. Bottom line. At the deepest level of the plot. Who is the main character? What does he want? Who is he fighting?
See lessAs the ghost of a young man lingers in his apartment, he gradually transforms into a vengeful, evil spirit as he gets more and more jealous of his roommates' lives and becomes convinced that they are starting to forget him
I like the idea of a ghost hanging around his apartment. Sounds a little like the ghost from Being Human http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1349938/. But I'd like a hint as to why. Feel you need to give us an indication of his desire. What does he want? In Being Human the ghost wants to know first why sheRead more
I like the idea of a ghost hanging around his apartment. Sounds a little like the ghost from Being Human http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1349938/. But I’d like a hint as to why. Feel you need to give us an indication of his desire. What does he want? In Being Human the ghost wants to know first why she is still here. She finds out she was murdered. Then she wants to take revenge on the person who killed her.
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