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Forced to stay at home following a heart attack, a high powered exec realizes he doesn’t know his teenage daughter when she announces she?s pregnant, prompting him to try and reconnect with her and stabilize the family.
Neat premise. I think that specifying that the holiday is to recuperate is redundant given that you include that it's a forced holiday and post heart attack. Here's my suggestions for the opening: During a forced holiday following a heart attack, a high powered exec realizes he doesn't know his teenRead more
Neat premise. I think that specifying that the holiday is to recuperate is redundant given that you include that it’s a forced holiday and post heart attack. Here’s my suggestions for the opening:
During a forced holiday following a heart attack, a high powered exec realizes he doesn’t know his teenage daughter…
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Forced to stay home following a heart attack, a high powered exec realizes that he doesn’t know his teenage daughter…
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