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  1. Posted: August 2, 2019In: Crime

    A girl was murdered and the investigator and her friends are trying to find the murderer but their hidden secrets stand in their way from finding the truth

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2019 at 1:17 pm

    How about: When the body of a girl turns up [in some unique and specific way/place], her friends must put aside their differences/resolve old conflicts/confront hidden truths to get to the bottom of murder before someone else is murdered/something else terrible happens. You could also add a midpointRead more

    How about:

    When the body of a girl turns up [in some unique and specific way/place], her friends must put aside their differences/resolve old conflicts/confront hidden truths to get to the bottom of murder before someone else is murdered/something else terrible happens.

    You could also add a midpoint reversal:

    When the body of a girl turns up [in some unique and specific way/place], her friends turn on each other; but when a second body is found, they must put aside their differences/resolve old conflicts/confront hidden truths to uncover the murderer.

    Love a good crime story!

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  2. Posted: August 2, 2019In: SciFi

    When a terminal patient becomes immortal, she must uncover the secret that saved her life; but when she discovers she’s the target of a military conspiracy, she fights to?protect her unborn child.

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2019 at 12:57 pm

    With thanks to the new logline generator, currently in testing!

    With thanks to the new logline generator, currently in testing!

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  3. Posted: August 2, 2019In: Historical

    An enslaved Civil War era steamboat pilot, his family and his crew commandeer a Confederate steamer in a daring seven mile open water dash to Union freedom. – Based on a true story.

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2019 at 12:53 pm

    Maybe include the 'true story' bit at the beginning, if you can?? Based on a true story, an enslaved steamboat pilot commandeers a Confederate steamer during the Civil War in? a bid to steer his family to safety. Or similar. :) Sounds like a great story! I'd watch it, for sure.

    Maybe include the ‘true story’ bit at the beginning, if you can??

    Based on a true story, an enslaved steamboat pilot commandeers a Confederate steamer during the Civil War in? a bid to steer his family to safety.

    Or similar. 🙂

    Sounds like a great story! I’d watch it, for sure.

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